I need help to check some texts translated to English

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Hi!

I'm making a game in English and I need someone check the following texts and tell me if they are written well or not.

My language is Spanish and I'm not very good at English, so I need your help with this.

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Food: Collect as much food as you can to get points and increase the bonus bar.

Special bonus: By collecting food will increase the bonus bar, when this is full you will receive a special bonus (drop x3) for 15 seconds.

Rotten food: If you eat rotten food, you subtract points and bonus bar will decrease.

Money: collects all the money you can to upgrade your skills.

Harmful items: be careful not collect harmful items, this can subtract life and immobilize you for a while.

Anchor: Beware the anchor, when you see the signal an anchor drop anywhere, is a matter of luck that this does not fall on you. You can upgrade your life to avoid die.

Time: At the beginning you have 30 seconds of time, if you survive until the end, you win the level. You can buy extra time to collect more food and money.
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If something is not written well or not understand please let me know.

Thanks!

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Here is what I think might be better

Food: Collect food to increase points and earn special bonuses!
Special Bonus: Collect enough food and earn a special bonus!
Rotten Food: Avoid rotten food!
Money: Collect money to upgrade skills!
Harmful Items: Avoid harmful items at all costs!
Anchor: WATCH OUT when you see the anchor signal or else!
Time: Survive until time is up to beat the level!

I think these may convey a better message than the previous, but this is just my own opinion.