How does it look?

Just curious on how it looks and all!

Please, any suggestions for the game would be appreciated!

I plan to have it done in a week.

(P.S. Sorry about the crappy video quality...)

http://www.facebook.com/video/video....26646914161199

OK, here's a new link since I can't figure out how to make the video public...

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=126646914161199&set=vb.100004476732432 &type=2&theater

Ok, I'm going to be honest with you... Based on this video alone, this game looks incredibly boring. The graphics are decent, and it has a nice overall visual style to it.

However, your video shows a completely flat level, with water/pitfall hazards that appear to not actually need to be jumped over, (you see the player jumping, but at the end of the video he just walks across them). Also, the pink critters which I can only assume are enemies - when ran into seem to just die and make the player jump without actually needing to jump on them first, which makes them sort of pointless as an obstacle.

If you really want to sell people on your game, you will need a MUCH more interesting level design and a wider variety of obstacles that actually need avoiding.

If I'm completely missing the point of your game then I apologize, but this movie definitely does not make me as a gamer want to play this game. You have a good start of something, that much is shown - but without seeing further gameplay I would recommend you keep working on this one.

Neither video is working for me. Just says they are private

Well, Chaos, it is only the first level, and everything you said is true, but in the end it will look like this:

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the videos aren't working for me either

Nor me! Put it on the tube or something.

Umm ok! no video......?

if (Facebook)

lame = true;

Sorry...

Take a look here: http://xstargaming.webs.com/apps/vid...97-wonderjump-

So any suggestions?

I plan to have this done by next Wednesday, so suggest quickly!