NoWhere - Away From Home (KickStarter) - WIP

[FBEpyon]

Hello All,

I wanted to share with you my project I have been working on, and wanted to invite you to my Kick Starter campaign.

I haven't gotten it fully approved just yet, and wait for it to go live, but until then please see the preview page. Please leave me comments about it as well.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects...token=f3342c8d

I will make sure I update the comments soon as well for you ..

Here is a little video on the youtube : https://youtu.be/LDmyazGIBW0

Thanks!!

FBEpyon

[piscesdreams]

Looking forward to seeing more. I would suggest another proofreading of the Kickstarter. There was a misspelling of concept as "conceipt", and a lot of people are sticklers for a professional appearance.

[FBEpyon]

Thanks for spotting that.. It was late when I finally finished working on the layout and stuff.. I should have more soon when I'm able to get more time this weekend..

[chrilley]

You already know what I think of the neat visuals from our PM exchange

So my feedback is mostly focused on your presentation video:

Remember that people tend to be an impatient lot(I know that I am!). I think showing some gameplay will help drive home your presentation better than text printed out(at a rather slow rate).

I think you could use your pre-alpha video for presentation and then add in a bit more fast-paced version of the "explaining-part" towards the end of it or somewhere else on the screen while the gameplay footage is playing.

Just my thoughts, I hope you get this funded! Good luck!

[Robeez]

Visually the game looks like a really nice NES game, the sound effects support this as well. I'm impressed.

However the video is not telling me what the game is about and what I can expect from it.

You will probably get a lot more supports if they know what they are going to support.

Hope this helps, good luck!

[Kisguri]

Add more regular images, static or Gif'd to your Kickstarter page.

[FBEpyon]

Hello all,

Thanks for all the suggestions and support I launched my kickstarter page today!!

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects...away-from-home

Please let me know what you all think.

Thanks,

FBEpyon

[FBEpyon]

Hello All,

Just wanted to show you my new editor isn't she ugly!! :P

editor.jpg

Thanks,

FBEpyon