Wongstar A self proclaimed hero

[mcm85]

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[oruga]

I tried it, I honestly think it needs a ton of work, I like the concept but it needs to be better executed.

I don't know exactly what I'm supposed to do, it tells me to protect humans and get into the locker rooms, I don't see any humans nor can I get out of the football field.

An in-game tutorial is necessary, you shouldn't alternate between horizontal and vertical screens (have all the game be either, horizontal or vertical), the football field looks really confusing with all those numbers (make a bitmap, use a different font and blend the numbers into the field) they look like counter.

Dedicate more time to this and it could turn out alright, I like the characters and the story and seems like the gameplay could be good but it's confusing right now.

[Radical]

I tried it, I honestly think it needs a ton of work, I like the concept but it needs to be better executed.

I don't know exactly what I'm supposed to do, it tells me to protect humans and get into the locker rooms, I don't see any humans nor can I get out of the football field.

An in-game tutorial is necessary, you shouldn't alternate between horizontal and vertical screens (have all the game be either, horizontal or vertical), the football field looks really confusing with all those numbers (make a bitmap, use a different font and blend the numbers into the field) they look like counter.

Dedicate more time to this and it could turn out alright, I like the characters and the story and seems like the gameplay could be good but it's confusing right now.

Thanks for your input, the yellow text in the story frame just before the game gives you hints on what to do. The first map(football feild) you only need to kill them without dieing and if you let them get past you to the otherside of the map you will get a score reduction. I will probly make a tutorial button on my future games to further explain the game mechanics.

Hehe, i see you point with those numbers.... maybe i will get around to fix that :P.

[Radical]

I will give it a go as soon as i get a moment.

My game has only been on sale a couple of days. Weirdly, the figures seemed wrong after the first day (43 sales, but later in the day it changed to 16!?!). Todays figures seem to be 13 (29 downloads total).

Going to get a small update ready over the next couple of days, hopefully they will at least get it back into the new releases chart for a bit.

I allso had this, this monday. Sales were at 221, then 90 something, dunno why :P

[Redsquirrel]

Ah not just me then although i wouldnt have minded 91 sales ! :-)

[Radical]

Ah not just me then although i wouldnt have minded 91 sales ! :-)

It was the first day i made it free so didn't earn a single dollar,